Comments on: The Operating Room - Randall Pretzer http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2007/02/06/the-operating-room-randall-pretzer/ Speculative Flash Fiction Thu, 09 Sep 2010 09:32:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Stephanie Vann http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2007/02/06/the-operating-room-randall-pretzer/#comment-2567 Stephanie Vann Sat, 10 Feb 2007 13:58:26 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2007/02/06/the-operating-room-randall-pretzer/#comment-2567 Chilling. A few small errors crept in though. - Calapse, should be spelled collapse. - The room they had me was hot... should have an 'in' in it. The room they had me in was hot. - the one had put their head in their arms... don't need the 'the' at the beginning. Chilling.

A few small errors crept in though.
– Calapse, should be spelled collapse.
– The room they had me was hot… should have an ‘in’ in it. The room they had me in was hot.
– the one had put their head in their arms… don’t need the ‘the’ at the beginning.

]]> By: Jim http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2007/02/06/the-operating-room-randall-pretzer/#comment-2408 Jim Tue, 06 Feb 2007 16:53:09 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2007/02/06/the-operating-room-randall-pretzer/#comment-2408 Horrifying to watch one's own death. Horrifying to watch one’s own death.

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