Comments on: Flight from the Dead - Leigh Clifford

Comments on: Flight from the Dead - Leigh Clifford http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/10/10/flight-from-the-dead-leigh-clifford/ Speculative Flash Fiction Sat, 22 Nov 2008 03:19:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Joni http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/10/10/flight-from-the-dead-leigh-clifford/#comment-347 Joni Tue, 10 Oct 2006 16:21:29 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2006/10/10/flight-from-the-dead-leigh-clifford/#comment-347 Ooh, chilling. Very "Thriller." I like. Ooh, chilling. Very “Thriller.” I like.

]]> By: Stephanie Vann http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/10/10/flight-from-the-dead-leigh-clifford/#comment-346 Stephanie Vann Tue, 10 Oct 2006 14:42:23 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2006/10/10/flight-from-the-dead-leigh-clifford/#comment-346 Nice build-up of tension. One small typo: rain water splashing her bear feet and legs. This should be bare, unless she's terribly hairy *g* Nice build-up of tension.

One small typo:

rain water splashing her bear feet and legs.

This should be bare, unless she’s terribly hairy g

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