Comments on: Case #714: The End of Time - Rod Drake http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/08/28/case-714-the-end-of-time-rod-drake/ Speculative Flash Fiction Sat, 22 Nov 2008 03:43:01 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Ben Marroquin http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/08/28/case-714-the-end-of-time-rod-drake/#comment-157 Ben Marroquin Sat, 02 Sep 2006 19:36:40 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2006/08/28/case-714-the-end-of-time-rod-drake/#comment-157 A highly enjoyable story and vivid. The POV felt perfect and put me into the action. I actually read it twice. Thanks. A highly enjoyable story and vivid. The
POV felt perfect and put me into the
action. I actually read it twice. Thanks.

]]> By: KatE http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/08/28/case-714-the-end-of-time-rod-drake/#comment-156 KatE Sat, 02 Sep 2006 01:46:50 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2006/08/28/case-714-the-end-of-time-rod-drake/#comment-156 GREAT STORY - My favorite sentence.. "My revolver’s nearly empty and the Immaculate Shield is wavering like a drunk Catholic girl on Saturday night." I laughed so much I cried. You're great Rod. GREAT STORY – My favorite sentence.. “My revolver’s nearly empty and the Immaculate Shield is wavering like a drunk Catholic girl on Saturday night.” I laughed so much I cried.  You’re great Rod.

]]> By: Stephanie Vann http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/08/28/case-714-the-end-of-time-rod-drake/#comment-150 Stephanie Vann Tue, 29 Aug 2006 14:01:51 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2006/08/28/case-714-the-end-of-time-rod-drake/#comment-150 I love the fresh take on the old story. Beautifully written, although I did spot one small typo: He works in mystery ways after all. I presume you mean mysterious? *g* I love the fresh take on the old story. Beautifully written, although I did spot one small typo:

He works in mystery ways after all.

I presume you mean mysterious? g

]]> By: hana http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/08/28/case-714-the-end-of-time-rod-drake/#comment-149 hana Tue, 29 Aug 2006 04:16:29 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2006/08/28/case-714-the-end-of-time-rod-drake/#comment-149 I like the voice. Very noir. cool story. I like the voice. Very noir. cool story.

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