Comments on: Absentia - Christopher J. Dwyer http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/08/08/absentia-christopher-j-dwyer/ Speculative Flash Fiction Sat, 22 Nov 2008 06:52:27 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Tribe http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/08/08/absentia-christopher-j-dwyer/#comment-56 Tribe Wed, 09 Aug 2006 01:11:34 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2006/08/08/absentia-christopher-j-dwyer/#comment-56 Good to see you spreading your fiction all over, Chris. Another strong, dark piece of fiction. Good to see you spreading your fiction all over, Chris.  Another strong, dark piece of fiction.

]]> By: hana http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/08/08/absentia-christopher-j-dwyer/#comment-54 hana Tue, 08 Aug 2006 20:32:32 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2006/08/08/absentia-christopher-j-dwyer/#comment-54 sometimes 2nd person pov can be distracting, but this was very well-done. Good story. sometimes 2nd person pov can be distracting, but this was very well-done. Good story.

]]> By: Jim http://fs.shamuswrites.com/2006/08/08/absentia-christopher-j-dwyer/#comment-52 Jim Tue, 08 Aug 2006 20:18:35 +0000 http://open-dialogue.com/fs/2006/08/08/absentia-christopher-j-dwyer/#comment-52 Wow, second-person perspective. That's not something you see often. This was well-done. A high degree of despair here. It also felt supernatural, almost like the character was fading out of the world bit by bit. Wow, second-person perspective.  That’s not something you see often.  This was well-done. 

A high degree of despair here.  It also felt supernatural, almost like the character was fading out of the world bit by bit.

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